Wish I knew what the last thing the last guy was saying was... Too many acrobatics for me, but a good "he needed killin'" flick

. - oh, he could have done that a lot sooner, for my opinion. And why would they send a CLUELESS receptionist to deliver eviction papers? The boss's wife didn't like her, or did the boss want her permenently gone? "Losing papers" doesn't do a lot of good - when they're advanced enough for flying cars, they probably have computerized document systems. "Let me get you another print of that." Girl annoyed me to no end.

"I just sold off all that junk on your property." 1) you didn't have any right to represent me, so you only sold off YOUR VALUE to them... promising what's not yours usually results in your giving up what IS yours tomake good.

2) THAT JUNK is my livelyhood, my house, my tools...you think you did me a FAVOR?

3) Lots of mean men with guns that shoot first for no reason aren't the type you negotiate with, and then try to defend after they've already tried to kill you - and are dead. Girl, you are worse than useless, you are a danger to MY survival.

But pretty good overall. With a character that was designed to make us despise her, she was appropriate... kind of like Kim on 24... had me stomping around the house yelling at her character for her stupidity and self-absorption.

Great work........Peace

ah yeah that makes a lot more sense! Maybe whenever Collins enters the field we see him click on the shield (like in the video where you didnt show what it did yet - snazzy) and then maybe a sniper shot from the yet revealed bandits. That would show off the shield and caused the bandits to quickly change their tactics from hiding to getting up close and personal. make more of theeeeeeese!