Post Apocalyptic Indy Short film directed, edited, and written by Timothy Hennessey. Shot with a Canon T3i and a Panasonic TM900. This was created all by high schoolers. It was shot in two (long) days. Endless hours editing..... Hope you enjoy! If you have any questions or constructive criticism please feel free to comment!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmZM3qBgMtM

 

Lance Michel
Okay...Interesting premise. Definitely something to work with here. But, need to pull that camera back, stabilize it, faster focus and open it up a stop or two. Guys, get your dads or someone older than 30 to play a character or two. It'll make an amazing difference in story depth. Was this "Memento" driven? Yes, I get that time is being 'shuffled' in the delivery of the story. And yes, I get that the box is some kind of time machine. But we still need a crumb path to follow the plot line. For a T3i and TM900, there is some pretty good chroma.

Did you use a filter? Post-Production? I like the effect! Dialog was believable. Set organization and layout pretty good. Little things, like sound of a breeze but the blanket on the crate not being moved by it. Holding spark plugs up to the light?? However, I can definitely see that you are working on your ability to tell a story with pure visualization. Nice! You guys should keep at this. The concept has potential. Grade: C