Lance Michel
Okay...Interesting premise. Definitely something to work with here. But, need to pull that camera back, stabilize it, faster focus and open it up a stop or two. Guys, get your dads or someone older than 30 to play a character or two. It'll make an amazing difference in story depth. Was this "Memento" driven? Yes, I get that time is being 'shuffled' in the delivery of the story. And yes, I get that the box is some kind of time machine. But we still need a crumb path to follow the plot line. For a T3i and TM900, there is some pretty good chroma.

Did you use a filter? Post-Production? I like the effect! Dialog was believable. Set organization and layout pretty good. Little things, like sound of a breeze but the blanket on the crate not being moved by it. Holding spark plugs up to the light?? However, I can definitely see that you are working on your ability to tell a story with pure visualization. Nice! You guys should keep at this. The concept has potential. Grade: C