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Again, Your shots have a very retro 60s feel...
I like them... I am with the other on the reflection
I'd say #2, 4 & 7 are my favs.
I like them... I am with the other on the reflection
I'd say #2, 4 & 7 are my favs.
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Nice job man 
You're getting much better at you're shoots. Posing, PP..etc.
The only CC i have, is I think #5 should be cropped above the reflection. But that's really just preference.
You're getting much better at you're shoots. Posing, PP..etc. The only CC i have, is I think #5 should be cropped above the reflection. But that's really just preference.
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WOW these are very nice, the model seems very natural. She really knows how to work the camera.
on 5. you should try darkening the reflection a bit.
on 6. remove some of the blood vessels in her eyes.
That black sofa makes an amazing textured background, great work !
I do agree with 8600RPM's thoughts
on 5. you should try darkening the reflection a bit.
on 6. remove some of the blood vessels in her eyes.
That black sofa makes an amazing textured background, great work !
I do agree with 8600RPM's thoughts
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Thanks everyone.
Yeah we bought the couch cause we love that pattern. The other side of the cushion is just plain leather defiantly not as cool.
WOW these are very nice, the model seems very natural. She really knows how to work the camera.
on 5. you should try darkening the reflection a bit.
on 6. remove some of the blood vessels in her eyes.
That black sofa makes an amazing textured background, great work !
I do agree with 8600RPM's thoughts
on 5. you should try darkening the reflection a bit.
on 6. remove some of the blood vessels in her eyes.
That black sofa makes an amazing textured background, great work !
I do agree with 8600RPM's thoughts
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I didn't think this was the girl i met at Bahama Breeze.
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Would it be acceptable if i went through and redid her eyelashes in photoshop?
I look at the eyes of models before anything. Thats the only thing that's killing these shots for me, everything else is great.
I look at the eyes of models before anything. Thats the only thing that's killing these shots for me, everything else is great.
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If your that bored go for it lol.
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