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Maybe try and use a second flash to soften those shadows a bit or if you dont have another one just use some tinfoil as a reflector. You might also try moving the object further away from the background so you dont have to worry about those shadows, other then that they look good 
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Thanks all CC appreciated. What about the edit? To much saturation or brightness?
Thanks, yeah I need to get a couple more flashes. Will have to try the foil, you mean aim the flash up at foil and bounce the light down on the subject? I need a wide piece of wrapping paper to move the subjects back, the back drop cuts off in the frame and don't wanna do a bunch of PS to put it back.
Maybe try and use a second flash to soften those shadows a bit or if you dont have another one just use some tinfoil as a reflector. You might also try moving the object further away from the background so you dont have to worry about those shadows, other then that they look good
