fantastic plot edit concerning the dart and the kamino system. ok, the fight on kamino is fine to be omitted but the dogfight is awesome. cutting that was a mistake.the way you have crafted the story is great but a little candy isn't a bad thing. i feel like shmi should already be dead and anakin just murders the tuskens outright. you took out the dogfight but left in the conveyor belt scene? that is a terrible scene. having yoda pull out his saber and dooku ignite his then pull down the column over ob1 could negate the saber fight all together. personally the only time i was ok with yoda using a saber was to cut off the troopers heads.