NOW it's a decent video. Excellent choice in music I must say. Well done sir.
Only thin I would change...is I would have the video focus more on your fiance. It actually seems as though you are getting ready to propose to the dolphin handler, the way the video is set up in the beginning.

Just trying to help. Also, being as dull as I am, I had to watch it like twice to notice that the proposal was actually written on the boat bumper, and wasn't held off until the end.

What can I say...I'm a retard. LOL