I went through the shots from the other night again.
The original:
Two new ones:
I took someone's advice (dont entirely remember who and I don't feel like opening a new tab to look it up lol) on this one and did a tighter crop on the skyline itself.
All in all I like the original best. My favorite part is how the city remains constant through the whole bottom of the shot, but the sky fades slowly to black from right to left.
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