Originally Posted by 8600RPM

Ok, here we go...

1. Composition is good, the pose is a little on the strange side, but I really feel thats because of the processing on her left hand that my eye is drawn to. Highs on the chair are a bit clipped but thats probably just my monitor.

2. Same as #1, really, only shes hiding some of that hand, I see why you kept both images because I cant decide which one I like better either lol. I feel this one miiiight be the stronger of the two though.

3. IMO this is the strongest image in the set, composition is great, look is great, a little high key feel with the chair, PP is great, the only thing I'd touchup would be that red spot on her right eye. great image.

4. I like this shot too, composition works, the hotspot on the chair is a bit distracting, but she is lit well so its a wash IMO. That red spot in her eye is here too. I dont agree with streetracingonline that this is the strongest image, but it's prob my 3rd favorite of the set easily.

5. Not feeling the crop in this one, but I dont know what I'd change either without playing around with it, maybe a landscape crop with her camera left? Hard to say, I would leave the reflection however. PP is good here, lighting is great, just something with the crop IMO.

6. Now we're getting closer and into that "Oh damn her hair is everywhere" territory. I think it would benefit from a good cleanup of the hair, and that red spot removed again. I wasn't totally in love with that half smile, but I think it works here, gives it a more casual feel than the others.

7. 2nd strongest, beautiful shot. Really nothing to say here, great job.

8. Same feel as 7, but I think 7 does the job much better.


Overall, your PP is great as usual, the compositions are good, lighting is great, I dig them.