Calibrate the screen, its pretty simple and will help a LOT.

And yes, as previously stated her skin tones are way off...which appears to be because the contrast or saturation is just jacked up with the slider lol.

Also, watch the crops. Dont cut off her hands, or the top of her head. Depth of field seems to be good, so you've got the right idea there. I know these are just candids but step over enough to get that car out of the background next time.