im a professional photographer, (well, here on TR anyways), and in my professional opinion, it seems like you were trying too hard in these shots. I'm not saying you're a lousy photographer or anything, I've seen your other pictures(Caitlin, "my princess", etc), but in some of your different photoshoots, the scene just doesn't look comfortable. like the girl doesnt care, or something.

No real idea how to fix it, maybe its just me.

edit: damn ricans