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On January 16th, 2010 Christian and Joshua DeMello fell into a pool and were rushed to Fawcett and Peace River hospital. While two seperate teams of doctors worked on getting a faint heartbeat from baby Christian, Joshua was not able to get revived. Christian was taken to All Childrens Hospital in St Pete and fought for his life for the next few days. Sadly at 5:30 shared_pm on January 19th, 2010 Christian was pronouced brain dead. Parents Paul DeMello and Jessica Comeu agreed to donate his organs to help others and Christian has already saved a one year baby in texas and a 22 year old Girl in the area. Joshua and Christian were born on December 20th 2008 and share the same birthday as their brother Jesse DeMello. In the short 13 months they were alive they touched the lives of many and will never be forgotten. They will both be burried in the same coffin, side by side and hand in hand. They were never apart while on this earth and are now looking down on all of us from a better place.