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Old Aug 13, 2008 | 01:03 PM
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Originally Posted by Cornwalace
RECAP

If I missed a few parts, feel free to correct me anyone.
Nice job! I'd add at least a sentence or two mentioning his prior record with these scumbag moves. Something like, "When word of this attempt to scam JAP Works got out, several people from the community recognized Mr. Dono as the perpetrator of prior scams -- for example, taking payment on auctioned items without ever sending them. (insert other instances here)" Or something like that. Define the character.