Originally Posted by Punkinterviews

Talk about stupid assholes.....Lets correct your sentence.

The first letter/word in a sentence should be capitalised. Your first word should be So not so. Next, your should be you are or you're showing a conjunction between two words. Instead of making this a run-on sentence, you should us punctuations!! We can tell you didn't go to college cause you spelled that wrong as well. A.S.E. is an acronym and should be capitalised and each letter should have a period after it to show seperation of words. Double space after each period as well. You no as in "No you can't do that" when you know meant know like "I know what I'm talking about and you don't!". Thay should be they. Again, no should be know. Ever car, don't you mean every car? You don't need a comma after the word made. One more time, your should be a conjunction you are or you're. Don't forget your periods after the end of each sentence. Capitalise "Man" and put a comma after it. There shouldn't be another comma after gay, there should be a period. Double space after a sentence and all I's in a sentence refering to yourself should be capitalised. Again, capitalise your I's. Again, capitalise your I's. Again, capitalise your I's. Again, capitalis your I's. Man, talk about stupid assholes, you made the same I mistake in one sentence! Also, don't forget your last period.

That was your free lesson for the day. Now play nice!


EDIT: This message has been deleted by rangcrx. Reason: im to smart to bother with kids Are you sure?