Smoked Out Photography First Photo Shoot

**hondaking625** · 06-08-2011 09:45 PM

**smokedoutphoto** · 06-08-2011 09:53 PM

Trying to build my portfolio so hit me up!

**TampasOriginalSoarer** · 06-09-2011 12:23 AM

TIP: If you are going to add Motion Blur to simulate motion like in #2, include whats through the windows. The trees are still motionless.

...And time to clean your sensor.

**smokedoutphoto** · 06-09-2011 12:26 AM

Thanks bro it's nice to see constructive opinion.

**96whiteknight** · 06-09-2011 11:58 AM

Originally Posted by TampasOriginalSoarer

...And time to clean your sensor.

Understatement of the century.

**Paulino** · 06-09-2011 12:11 PM

I wouldn't have shot those cars period.

**civic99** · 06-10-2011 08:50 PM

Originally Posted by Paulino

I wouldn't have shot those cars period.

Me either.

On to the critism, yes the motion blur is fake, the HDR is a little on the strong side

The picture of the back of the hatch it's way out of focus.

**The Chimichunga** · 06-11-2011 03:31 AM

Originally Posted by smokedoutphoto

Trying to build my portfolio so hit me up!

Before thinking about building a portfolio, you might try thinking about learning how to use a camera.

**TampasOriginalSoarer** · 06-11-2011 11:22 AM

Originally Posted by 96whiteknight

understatement of the century.

lol!

**xnissan240x** · 06-14-2011 09:08 AM

Originally Posted by The Chimichunga

Before thinking about building a portfolio, you might try thinking about learning how to use a camera.

Originally Posted by The Chimichunga

Before thinking about building a portfolio, you might try thinking about learning how to keep trash from accumulating on your sensor.

Fixed.

**chicacivic1217** · 06-21-2011 02:26 AM

I am no expert, but i CAN tell you HDR is a bit overwhelming in almost all of the pics. No need to overdo it.

If i had to pick the best one, i would say #4

**Ls_[eg]hatch** · 06-21-2011 02:39 AM

Originally Posted by chicacivic1217

I am no expert, but i CAN tell you HDR is a bit overwhelming in almost all of the pics. No need to overdo it.

If i had to pick the best one, i would say #4

yup too much edit not enough picture...& i would agree #4 takes it.

**chicacivic1217** · 06-21-2011 03:06 AM

^#4 looks like it was taken with a DSLR all the others look phone camera-ish point and shoot-ish

Practice makes perfect though! Keep shooting, read, research and shoot shoot shoot! You will eventually get the hang of it.

**Ls_[eg]hatch** · 06-21-2011 03:16 AM

Originally Posted by chicacivic1217

Practice makes perfect though! Keep shooting, read, research and shoot shoot shoot! You will eventually get the hang of it.

all of this!...well i haven't done much reading just alot of shooting & iv been slowly noticing my shots & editing coming out better each time will.

**chicacivic1217** · 06-21-2011 03:29 AM

I have been neglecting my camera, i need to wipe the dust off my camera bag and go out to shoot.

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