JoJo69s EG Hatch Shoot

[Jake2k]

Your an idiot.

[AHHthatsJDMyo]

lolz

[8600RPM]

1. Composition, car needs to be better placed in the frame. A little more angle to show more of the car would have saved this image. I find myself checking out what's down the street more than the car, and we know that wasnt the goal here.

2. Composition again, center the car in the frame here, straighten the wheel. I'd also remove the barrel distortion if you're going to frame with the center lines of the road in the image. Background is too busy for a side profile IMO, but that's just me.

3. Strong image, it is underexposed though, some fill flash could have went a long way here shooting that direction.

4. IMO I can't stand these angles, but that's just me again. A little to strong on the vignette to bring some life into this image it looks like. I feel the only shot you take with the owner in the car on a planned shoot should be a rig shot, because its simply a distraction on a static photo.

5. Dig it, maybe some cloning on that light pole reflection, done, well done here.

6. What IS in focus here? Otherwise composition is nice, crowd pleaser shot for sure.

7. I personally like this image a little better than 6, because what should be in focus...is.

8. Not feeling composition here either.

9. Underexposed again, stopping in the middle of the road sucks doesn't it?

10. Holy contrast, this may be where guy was getting his overprocessed comment, Because it is a bit cranked, but I wont use overprocessed because that's not really the case, just too much contrast, saturation.

Hope that was a little more helpful and in depth, at the end of the day you shot a clean car and had fun, who cares right?

[96whiteknight]

^ lol...OP's last post was over a year ago.

[8600RPM]

And?

[96whiteknight]

And his last login was in June '10.